If Only
If Only One night, while lonely, I closed my eyes in wishing. Was it you who'd come by yearnful reminiscing? By falling star, if only... Whispered by my ear a breeze short lived and fleeing. Warming,...
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Some may have seen this one on a different board. I posted it here because it is a personal favorite. Although it is a formed work it fell into "Matters of the heart" because it was a matter of the...
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Quote:One night, while lonely, I closed my eyes in wishing. Was it you who'd come by yearnful reminiscing? By falling star, if only... The first verse is mesmerizing Ken, and it never lets go! Big...
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Wow. W&R this is a true beauty. I love the form, it's very lyrical. Simply stunning.
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Thanks Brian and Gail. I am happy you enjoyed. Gotta respond now to your comments. I'm outta here for the weekend! "Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the universe of desire within"
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Have a great weekend! (Just had to come back and read this one again. It's even more beautiful on subsequent reads. )
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Ken this is simply breathaking, beautiful, dreamy and yet laced with a touch of sadness....I adored every word....Poe If I could come back as anything, it would be as one of your tears. How could I...
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"Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the universe of desire within"
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If Only, a kiss could be wished upon a star If only a whispered sigh would dry the tear upon your cheek.... sorry Ken... forced me to wax poetic, My Friend....
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haha, poor Rox. Dee tried to wax you...If only I could say she did...but I'll stay out of it! "Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the universe of desire within"
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Tears I've wept would pass with falling star while fading another daggar pressed into soft flesh, seeking truth. beautiful!!!!!!!!! J
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truly amazeing imagery passed thought my mind as i soaked this one in,~tips cap~, thank you poet thank you .. ~T~Faol saol agat agus bas in Eirinn
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Thanks Artist and Thomas! I am honored that this touched you and grateful that you shared this with me!"Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the universe of desire within"
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Willow! This is classically sharp Not enough adjectives to say how this one got to me. And your rhyme is tight, and not a bit forced on the mind, just plays like a soft melody here in the reading of...
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Hey SPD, Just wanted to thank you for your wonderful comments before this one outlives its life here. Thanks and appreciated!"Inspiration blows from no outer sky but from the universe of desire within"
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